A step in to the night
51Feel your heart beat
steady time,
rhythm and rhyme
like the drum beat of your life
up late prime time
booz if you choice
rolling with your crew
flipped and twisted
drunk and reckless
feel you heart beat
steady time,
rhythm and rhyme
the drum beat of your life
up late, wrapped in silence
thoughts dance
as shadows pass
through the corners or you eyes.
after images, lights flash,
memories grab and drag
you back to another time.
feel your heart beat
steady time
rhythm and rhyme
the drum beat of your life
ever things fine
curling grin and flashing teeth,
mirrored hatter blocks wrap the head
to make sure the soul stays in.
flip out in to the pool,
i can fly but only for a moment or two,
wild beasts uncaged will ride the moon,
till it's gone and Sun burns the black to blue.
angel arms caress me now
freckles left form angel lips
spot my body form tip to tip.
a picture in a memory.
art that only one can see.
feel you heart beat
steady time
rhythm and rhyme
the drum beat of my life.
i wish i could paint like this but i cant (sigh) you can find this painting in the wood stock museum.
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yeah i like it but one thing about poetry is i'm never quite sure how to punctuate lol and looking at this one i sort of started doing more of it at the end than the begging... but hey when it comes ot poems who's to say what is right and wrong
My thoughts exactly. That's been my biggest problem, and fear, the dreaded punctuation. That takes longer than the writing sometimes, lol.
Frieda Babbley Level 2 Commenter 2 years ago
Very nice! Love the rhythm and the repetition, the action. Great photo to go along with it. Would really be nice to paint like that.